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12/29/2011 7:32:55 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Hi! Here's a poem I wrote. Please tell me what you think!
Valentines Day Is For Revenge
Why won't you notice me? I've been here all along. What do want? It's in my heart where you belong.
You prefer her. That girl with the crown. What about me? All you do is frown.
I know I'm not much. I'm really trying. But you just walk away, and leave me crying.
If you look in my eyes, you will see pain. To hide my tears, I walk in the rain.
I will get revenge. You will see your mistake. You left me hanging. Your life I will take.
Happy valentines day! It won't be a bore. You just can't tame, My lust for gore.
Goodbye now. I love you still. Your engraved in my heart. You always will.
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/1/2012 9:28:14 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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I LOVE it that is really good 'high fives' i hate valentine's day im always single or alone
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 3:31:51 AM
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 blackrose Posts 81
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<3KILLxXmeXxSW33TLY<3 wrote:
I LOVE it that is really good 'high fives' i hate valentine's day im always single or alone
Maybe you won't be this year
-- nobody dies a virgin; life fucks us all
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1/2/2012 3:32:41 AM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Lol i most certainly hope not
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 3:32:41 AM
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 blackrose Posts 81
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& I really Like the poem good no Greay job :] aha
-- nobody dies a virgin; life fucks us all
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1/2/2012 3:38:59 AM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Lol yeah it was a good one...i honestly thought itd be another cheesy poem about V-day.......NO OFFENSE to the author......and then i read it and i like it a lot
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 5:27:23 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Thanks you guys! My family thought it was creepy and called me well, a freak. Glad someone appreciates my poems <3
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 5:32:17 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Well its not they just dont fully understand....and being a freak is AWSOME to me it means you have the balls to be want you want to be different....unlike these pussies in todays world
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 5:36:14 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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I agree. IM A FREAK AND IM PROUD My friend tells me I am mentally superior
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 5:41:17 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Exactly..... ^_^ if you cant axcept yourself you cant go foreward to be who you are supposed to be.....lmao...thats an awsome way to put it hahaha
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 5:44:34 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Yup! Very true.
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 5:48:06 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 5:50:28 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Sooo....
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 5:57:59 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Sooooooo......hows it swingin?
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 6:01:15 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Good. Good. How bout you?
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 6:03:26 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Better now that im home and outa hell...and my boyfriend makes mah day better so im good
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 6:09:56 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Awwwwww <3 That's cute! ^.^
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 6:12:52 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Ii know :3 hes fuckin amazin! Lol!
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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1/2/2012 6:18:35 PM
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S{he's} Br{ok}en❤ Posts 829
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Wish I had a bf..... Oh well the time will come... Eventually... I hope ^.^
-- The frog in the well was happy. It wasn't interested in what was outside the well.
The frog in the well was happy. It was recluse to what happened outside of the well.
And you were happy. Because you didn't know what occurred outside of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I tried hard to get out from the bottom of the well.
I wanted to know the world that was outside the well. So I climbed up numerous of times, despite falling down over and over again.
But then I realized it. The higher and higher I climb, the pain increases when I fall down again.
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1/2/2012 6:22:13 PM
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Let_Love_Bleed_Red Posts 1377
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Exactly...and sometimes before you get him you get your heart ripped out and mutalated but it makes you aprreciate him more...
-- {•Guy 1: who is God? Guy 2: well you know when you close your eyes and wish real hard for something.....God is the one who ignores you...•} ~~THE CUTTER'S LULLABYE~~ hushabye baby you're almost dead. you dont have a pulse and your pillows red. your family hates you. your "friends" let you bleed. sleep tight with a knife. cause its all you need. rockabye baby.broken and scarred you didnt know life would be this hard. to end the pain you hid so well and down you'll come baby straight back to hell. [*make me competely numb and dumb*} {*When are you gonna realize you're now and forever mine....i will not compromise...] [×**We are the people you hate...we are the bastards you created...×] [We crank it up down here we get loud down here we throwin down, down here in the dirty dirty south we all came to kick it in the sticks] [*G.R.I.T.S. A Girl Raised In The South*]
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